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Margaritaville Contest

New first verse of "Margaritaville" contest
USA Weekend just did an article about Jimmy Buffett this week...he's finally made the cover of a magazine. Although he's an Obama Bin Laden supporter, I can forgive him for that... Anyways, the magazine is holding a contest to win a trip to Jamaica, and all you need to do is write a new first verse of "Margaritaville." It didn't take me long to come up with my entry, because it pretty much summed up my Key West experience in just a few lines. Here it is:

On the beach with my boat drink

Watching the sun sink

The palm trees swaying along with the breeze

The smell of salt in the air

I don't have any cares

Down here I can do whatever I please.

There ya go. Jamaica, here I come. LOL!



Comments

Lyrics for new first line ad infinitum

Twinfinity musician adds,

Treys over Deuces
I pray it's not useless
I've gotta full house all day long
It might be a low hand
but everywhere I am
I love ya babe
but I've gotta get home

My Lyrics

Here is my lyrics didn't know about the contest in time                                                        Patricia Jordan 662-386-3337

Down in the deep south

Fishing for large mouth

Got man's best friend sitting right by my side

Sipping a Landshark

Can't beleive it's gotten dark

Guess I'll just troll back in with the tide

Patricia Jordan

38 Rusty Lane

Columbus Ms 39705   662-386-337                     p.s. Just in case you want to respond!!!

that's it?

here's mine...

Dreaming the sea breeze,
Away from the cold freeze
Nippin’ on ‘ritas, down on the bay
Tripping a bar tour,
in a world where there’s NO war
Just lovin’ life in a hammock of ease.
 
respectfully submitted by
KEY WEST CORY
 
thought yours would have been a lot deeper

simplicity

Deeper? Margaritaville is about simplicity, my friend.

Cousin Mike

Lyrics Contest

Nice try fellas.  I hope to send you a post card from Jamaica, mon!

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